A lot of people have asked "Why do agents reject queries?" and "Why don't you request pages?"
I've seen several agents do this, so I thought I'd try it out and see how it goes. I'm taking aside a couple of hours for queries today (since I don't like to get TOO behind). I won't give specifics, because I believe in preserving the identity of writers who submit to me; however, I will try to give a general idea of why I do/don't request partials. Maybe there will be a recurring trend or maybe it'll be very different. If you want to check out what Lowenstein Associates DOES represent and what our
submission guidelines are (read: NO EMAIL QUERIES - form on the web site), it might help you figure out why some were rejected.
Either way - here we go!
Queries (175 came in this weekend alone)
Right off the bat: 12 queries from this weekend that were emailed instead of submitted via online form, as required. Unfortunately, I'm not mean enough to just delete. I send a standard "see our web site for sub guidelines" reply without reading and then delete.
1- one sentence about book. I have no idea what form of fiction it is. Pass. (they also submitted the SAME query four times....trust the system. If you see "Thank you for submitting" after you hit "submit," then we got it.)
2- We don't rep romance. pass
3- Three paragraphs about the author. Nothing about the book. Pass
4- Asking if I would be interested in a fiction novel (groan). But it hasn't been written bc wants confirmation that I'm interested in the idea first. Pass
5- 350,000 words. Pass
6- memoir but no platform/credentials. nothing stands out. Pass.
7- We don't rep novellas. Pass
8- I really had no idea what the book was about. Too many plot lines. Pass.
9- Thriller that just wasn't suspenseful. Pass.
10- historical fiction: list of morals of the story as opposed to what the story is about. Pass.
11- YA - discusses list of morals. Pass
12- Non-fiction (NF): no platform/not unique topic. Pass
13- Adult Mystery: no hook. Pass.
14- You started the book but haven't finished? Fiction? Pass.
15- Really good query, but the storyline is too similar to something else. Pass.
16- Memoir: no platform. No unique story. Pass
17- NF: no platform. Not unique. Pass
18- YA: too stereotypical. Pass
19- YA: another carbon copy of something already out there. Pass
20- YA: good query, but I have a client who wrote something too similar. Pass.
21- 196,000 word YA. pass
22- NF: No platform. Not unique. Pass
23 - Super high fantasy...not our thing....Pass
24- four page query for romance? pass
25- Marketing plans with planned DVD and merchandise but nothing about book? Pass
26- 185,000 women's fiction? pass
27- about 5 plots in this mystery...totally unfocused...pass
28- YA contemporary fiction: good query but doesn't seem to have strong writing. pass
29- NF: no credentials. Common topic without unique twist. pass
30- 16,000 YA. pass
31- NF: no credentials. common topic without unique twist. pass
32 - YA: 145,000 words. pass
33 - YA: Contemporary that is WAY too emo for my taste. pass
34 - YA: Paranormal romance with a topic I've never seen before? Nice! Requested sample pages.
35 - NF: no credentials. common topic. pass
36 - High fantasy. We don't rep. pass
37 - Adult mystery - good hook, good plot outline, requested pages!
38 - Thriller that isn't very thriller-esque....pass
39 - no query. just pasted pages. pass
40 - you tell me that you love the characters and the plot but don't tell me about said characters or plot? pass
41 - NF: no credentials. no unique twist. pass
42 - NF: no credentials. no unique twist. pass
43 - there's already a book like this - it's called DaVinci Code. pass
44 - NF: no credentials....no unique twist...pass
45 - 308,000 word high fantasy? pass
46 - I can't take on book 2 if you self published book 1. pass
47 - NF: interesting topic but already other books like it out there. pass
48 - Begging doesn't work....pass
49 - YA: can't take book 2 if first one was self published...pass
50 - NF: no credentials...no unique twist...pass
Random Facts
- Why do we require a submission form? Ok, yes they can be a pain; however, trust me that for our system, it works wonders. It not only helps filter queries into one folder, but it also means your query WON'T get caught in the spam folder - EVER. You get a confirmation that it was received (on our Web page), which most authors want anyway. We both win.
- Do you use a form reject? Yes. If you follow submission guidelines (read: use the form) then I will always reply. I use a form reject, because since I give each query the time it deserves (hey, if you took the time to write it, I'll respect you and read the entire thing), then I simply don't have the time to write a personal response to each query.
- What if I sent a query and didn't get a response? Queries typically take 2 weeks or less for me to reply. If you haven't heard by then, then it means that A) there was a freak act of nature that kept me from getting to queries (read: hospital stay, snowstorm kept me from work for the day, had to take a work-related trip, etc); my reply was caught in YOUR spam folder; OR that your email account requires me to authenticate mine somehow. I simply do NOT have time to go through and "verify" my email. If you are querying us, use an email account that doesn't require authentication. There are at least a dozen emails a week that will never receive my reply, because I get a "I don't know you - please fill out this form" response. If you're not sure if your email requires this, play it safe: Gmail rocks.
- What do you mean you rejected just because of credentials? With certain non-fiction topics, you have to have a platform. Look at it this way: if you're at Barnes and Noble staring at the "how-to" section and you see two books side-by-side titled "THIS BOOK WILL GET YOU AN AGENT: 30 days from Query to Publication." Are you going to buy the one written by Jeremy Lee Smith or the one written by Janet Reid? Probably the one written by Janet Reid since A) she's an agent and B) she has one hell of an awesome reputation. Whereas Jeremy Lee Smith (I made up that name - sorry if there's an actual agent by that name. I'm pretty sure there isn't) is just some dude that came up with an idea and wrote the book. Non-fiction, especially how-to/help books, really need a kick ass platform to sell to publishers. So if you're not an 'expert' in your field or if you can't get experts to contribute, you probably won't sell your proposal
Tomorrow - I'll do something similar with queries and hopefully a few partials....only had time for 50 queries today so we'll see how tomorrow shapes up.